Friday, August 6, 2021

alma

This is my character description i had to create a piece of writing about Alma's apperance 

we had to include adjectives/describing words   the hard part was probably doing the brainstorm 

i enjoyed the part when we went back and edited it next time i would probably fix up my description words

by Zach  

 


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  1. Mrs CostelloAugust 27, 2021 at 11:06 AM

    Hi Zach

    I hope that everything is good at home in your bubble?

    Thanks for sharing you description of Alma. This was a really interesting short video to watch. I thought it started out really happy and then ended the total opposite. It was sad and a little bit creepy.

    Next time if you could make your picture a little bit bigger it would be so much easier to read.

    Well done, keep up the great work! I look forward to reading more of your work while you are learning from home.

    Until next time

    Mrs Costello :)

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